j153e
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 Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 7:08 pm Post subject: What do you think of this dialogue? Two main characters are |
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| What do you think? Main characters' bored dialogue:Susan: Last night I watched E’s...like... Wedding something... and they were showing like all these wierd weddings ya know?Taylor: Oh, crazy weddings...muuuuh... craziest weddings? Yeah, I’ve seen parts of it.S: Yeah, well I was watching it, probably b/c there was nothing on (Michael Jackson’s “Thriller” begins) but... ummm...Thriller plays (they start to listen to the song and forget what they were talking about then snap out of it)....T: Go on... sorry!S: OH, anyway,...T: It’s intoxicating, sorry!S:I don’t know why that song is so good. But it is.T: It’s got a good beat! And then the thing is like (sings like Michael Jackson) THRILLUUUHH, thrilluh nights!S: It’s creepy but for some reason it makes you feel kind of POWERFUL.T: I know! You just want to kind of dance to it. But go on, I’m sorry!S: Oh, umm... but it was like, I don’t know, these wedding were really terrible. I was just sad that people have these kind of weddings.T: Like what?S: Umm... They had a bunch of people doing nude weddings. Where everybody’s naked.T: NUDE weddings?S: And one of the bridesmaids was like, “Well, the good thing is we don’t have to complain about dresses!”T: I (long i) don’t think I would attend that.S: Yeah, and it was like, I don’t know... How would...? Ugh. Why would you want your dad to walk you down the isle naked? That’s just really gross.T: Were they nudists, I guess?S: No, um, the people who were doing it just said, “This is our first time really just doing nudity like this and it’s really cool to see how everyone’s just really comfortable with themselves. I don’t know... and then there was this other girl and she had a camoflauge wedding. And her husband didn’t want to go on a honeymoon, he wanted to go on a HUNTINGmoon. That’s what he called it. So they were going to go somewhere where he could go hunting and she could sit and watch TV. And their whole wedding was camo; like she was wearing camo, and he was wearing camo.T: Wearing a camo dress???S: Oh, no, she was wearing a camo suit with like pants and stuff.T: Like those overall things with the boots? (S:yeah)S: Yeah, like everybody there. It was a big wedding. But just everybody was wearing camo.T: That’s terrible.S: Oh, and umm.. the vows were all different. It was like, “Do you promis to help so-and-so with all his hunting till the day he dies?” She was like (big country accent) “YEeas.”And then there was this other one where like this girl’s dad, the reception was really dumb, this girl’s dad was drunk and it was the reception, it was outside, and the big thing was that they had gotten some camels... that were going to be there...T: Whahahaha? (laughing)S: He was like: “These are the most famous camels in Oklahoma!”T: In Oklahoma?S: Yeah, and the camels got drunk or whatever, cause they kept giving them beer and I was like, “Poor camels!”. ........... But anyway, it was just really stupid and they had a bunch more. There was this one where this girl, um, the bride, was just freaking out because she wanted the bagpipe player to come and at one point she was like, “The BABGIPIPE player’s NOT HERE and I want him to play when we wed!!!” And she was really freaking out like crying and screaming about the bagpipe player. And then, someone called and said, “He’s on his way, he’s on his way!” And she’s like “YES! YES!” And she’s so happy about the bagpipe player and their wedding wasn’t Scottish or anything... she just wanted a bagpipe player...T: That’s really odd................... and kind of funny.I'm trying to write a script about the lives of two girls who are in college. They're extremely normal. It's just something I thought I'd do for fun. I wrote this up b/c it actually seems like something that my friends and I would talk about. The scene is set in their dorm and they're just sitting there halfway watching TV and halfway talking and doing nothing. I'm sure you know how that is! I just thought this was funny, so I was looking for some feedback to see what everyone else thought about it. |
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